I liked it, but you forgot about Oscar Mike and Ramirez doing everything. x3
Poor Ramirez. And let's not forget about Oscar Mike. He was the greatest of all.
Less hand, more pencil
Yeah Im not digging the hand. The omnipotent pencil was better. But still a good animation. One point though, I dont like when outside sources come in to screw up or fix a situation. It was better when the penic drew something that could act as it wanted, not something that was porbably drawn by the pencil, but possibly wasnt and comes in off screen.
You had to ruin it with god, didnt ya
This isnt an anti religion rant, this is you screwed up what you were building to with the repentance. To me, the message that comes off this is you can help people, but you cant help them enough till you follow god. And to me that was a cheap cheap cheap move on your part because if you cut out all that religious transformation crap, you get the same ending. So now, instead of this looking like an ispirational movie, its now just a cheap recruitment video, which is sad because I dont think thats what your going for. I maybe wrong, I know your animations are themed on the bible but I dont think your trying to recruit anyone.
I get that he was lost cause his mom (?) died and religion got on him on his feet, but they way it was portrayed made you think it was his ex. If it was your goal to be that religion gets him on his feet it should have been a more gradual deal, show his father calling a preist in and they have a chat, then have him do work on or for the church and then gradually he comes to accept god. I could have accepted that. But when you just jump it, it comes off as only religion saves people. So a 7 for that but I will give you a 5 because it was a good animation, even if the message got garbled.
Thats not a good wow. For all the wait and the build up and the legnth, you need to do more then what you did. He survived by being betrayed, big whoop. Thats the only thing that gets answered. Theres no humor and the characters achieved nothing. This is basically a 15 MB flash of nothing.It wasnt worth the wait and Im sorry if this sounds mean but its true. I was very disappointed by this.
I understand where you're coming from and I thank you for not simply voting 0 because you felt that way. The fact of the matter is episode 3 was never meant to be delayed this long and nothing could have truly satisfied after that elongated break. What I can tell you though is that there is a reason why "links" work the way they do. Look again into the background and hopefully you'll find I gave you a lot more than nothing.
it was ok
Not the best of the stick dance but it was ok. Stick needed to be white though (thats not why you get 8 though so dont worry). Too much drama in it. Its like you tried to make this this super surreal project when at the end of the day its a stick in a hat doing moves jackson did.
Needed Thriller in there.
It was ok
It was a great flash and all, but I didnt like the story line. I mean nothing can stop it except death? Thats pretty vulnerable dont you think? Its just a normal person then lol. Now if he had said nothing can kill him, he is too powerful or skillful, I would have left it alone, but that wasnt a good line. Also, these people are flying through the air, hacking and slashing with the skill and speed of masters, and the so called ultimate weapon dies by a clothesline? Story took me out of it. Sorry. 5/10 3/5
Nothing else I can say
But my favorite part was the cannonball scenes. First mario gets shot then Toad. Perfect combo. You did a great job, i cant tell you how to improve. 5/5 10/10
I loved it. Really there isnt anything I can say cause it was great. Crappy review huh? xD 10/10 5/5
Very good job
Im telling you, just that short movie made me laugh. Im sure the people you pitch to will love it. I really like the explination for how they got there. "Since no one does that anymore..." xD Good luck to you.
Glad you liked it! Thanks so much!
You bring up a valid point, but the problem is a hydra. There are many heads, and taking one down makes it pop up two more. To my way of thinking, and of course I mean no offence, believe what you want to belive, to my way of thinking, we cant keep handing out benifits to those who defy the system. Now deportation is a bit extreme, but its the law. Now if they want to work up to earn those benifits which we give them, go ahead and let them stay. But the few who dont, get rid of them. (Of course Im talking about the situation with spanish immigrants, and I use spanish as a broad term. There is another immigration issue arising, just hasnt hit critical mass like this has) And really, I only say that, because its for the good of this country. They take jobs yes, but Ive heard no man say "When I grew up, I didnt want to own a farm, just pick tomatoes, and those bastard mexicans crushed it". They take jobs we dont want, but that are no less critical to maintaining this great, if slightly diminished, nation. They also take jobs that arent so critical to the U.S, but thats no reason to boot them, for the majority still lies with jobs we dont aspire to want, unless in dire need. So thats my feelings, and Id like your input on it, so I can get a greater perspective on yours.
Animation wise, perfect. I gave you nine because the name was a bit misleading. I figured this for what it was, a message against deportation (the title told me that much) but I figured it for a choice movie. The Jedi/Sith choice movie you know. Good or bad, deport or save. But the only part scotty plays in this is to have that classic line be turned around for effect. Other then that, good job, you get my five. Good luck and Godspeed with your movement. We may not agree, but we want the same thing, and the way to attain it, well I support the one that works. So I hope yours does xD
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